by StyxxnStones
That was an impressive first chapter. You covered a lot of ground which was surprising as most start out slow and somewhat questioning what they write. I look forward to finding out their backstories in the coming chapters.
Although it moved a bit fast (as most first chapters often do) I enjoyed this thoroughly. Thus far, the writing is fluid and pleasing to read, but I'm more impressed by the main character's handicap and the very a-typical girl you've paired him with. I'm interested to see where this story goes.
I'll Be Watching - Galloglaich
I hope you keep up the writing. This was a realy good start to what I hope will be a long story.
Havent really seen anything like this on here not alot of good wizard stories on this site and its off to a really good start cant wait to read more
Starts off like one of the many genie stories on the site, loner finds a thing, hot girl pops out, you know the drill. Though I like the things you did differently here. The grimoire's maifestation being a tsundere is a big change from the norm. Also, the idea that this guy has this flaw/injury that he's quietly desperate to correct is a character trait that you don't see very often; it leads me to believe that he has some layers, something many protagonists in these kinds of stories don't. It's a good read, and I'm interested to see where it goes.
I enjoyed the read. helps to pass time over here. I'm on deployment. always good to read something just for beat off material
Going to add you to favourites, so I can keep an eye on the series.