All Comments on 'Fantasies Come True'

@AngeliqueRich.

This is one of the most erotic stories I have ever read from a first time writer. I will be following you

this is truly my kind of erotica. Please continue.

Absolutely loved your story. Very erotic and well paced writing, hopefully you'll write more soon x

Too many distracting mistakes. Loose and lose are two different words. Different meaning; different spelling; different pronunciation. How do you manage to use the wrong one? And that's just one example.

Get an editor to help.

What an erotic story. Reminds me of the times when I was running a swing house back in 1983-1995. Saw many a foursome just liked in the story. Barring the grammar mistakes I give this story 15 hot horny stars…

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You can bring your lovely thoughts to my place anytime!

Excellent premise...poorly delivered for want of a proofreading editor. Define "slided."