All Comments on 'Fantasy Becomes Reality'

by JaneJoyce0688

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Turbulence1973Turbulence1973over 5 years ago
More please

An excellent start! Hope to read more soon.

alextasyalextasyover 5 years ago
Steamy and seductive...

You make me suspect that Kim will train Dustin to be the fine lover she needs.

One of the more believable step-mom incest tales I've seen.

Thank you!

-a

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Couldn't get into it

I tried but didn't do it for me. *

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
No Protection...........

Will Kim get pregnant from her step-son?????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Really enjoyed this and hope that you get around to part 2. You're a talented writer who knows how to tell an exciting story.

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