All Comments on 'Fantasy Come True Ch. 01'

Make the animal in all of us come out!! Loved the approach and outcome of this submission. Excellent command of words/style. More please!!

one can prove to be very interesting and exciting, my sister you have a wonderful imagination as well as a good style of command for words and details...i would love to see this continue also...they are all great, your stories that is. Thanks for a although too short great start on a good read. respectfully your fan in Texas naynay