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All Comments on 'Fantasy Dancer [I-30] Pt. 01'

by charlessmythe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
wtf

This is the dumbest shit I've ever read.

daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 7 years ago
Like It

I liked your story. Dancing in a strip joint is a fantasy of mine. 5 Stars.

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
awesome

Kept me hard

Dark_StormDark_Stormover 7 years ago
Two tenses

You kept mixing present and past tense, often within the same sentence. Pick one and stick to it.

sargedog1sargedog1over 1 year ago

Svelte NOT servlet. An unpolished atrocity obviously written in haste while yanking or stuffing something.

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