All Comments on 'Fantasy Father'

Excellent writing, baby ~ Got my undivided attention. 💋💋💋

It;s a set up for a beautiful story to come. Love it.

Makes me horny

I like the slow progression of this story. The banter, the open minded conversation between father and daughter. Is he excited? Is she jealous? Is he running to keep from revealing his boner? Me likes!

I will be following this one.

I am wanting to see how this progresses...

Ignore Anonymous below: this is a cracking first chapter. Not every story has to lay it all out on the first page, and if you write more like this I and others will be more than happy to wait for it and read it in bits.

Great Father/Daughter interaction. Like sword play thrust and parry. The father's tee time could have been next week, however he need a way out of the house: "NOW!"

How about writing an actual one?