All Comments on 'Fantasy Man Pt. 08'

Than chapter 7. Seven was boring

I'm sort of disabled, not completely but I sit on the couch a lot and read stuff. I've read hundreds, probably thousands of stories here.

I love this one. It's a great story, well told, sort of a real life fantasy for every dude because we are all that nervous boy at some point. Who wouldn't want a Jessica to teach them.

Well done and I would love it if you stretched the story out until they had grandkids.

Love this series. 5 stars.

Amazing story, can't wait for more!

Loved it all so far and this is no exception a,though thought it was finishing with this chapter. Obviously had to be Dr Windsor.

5 again.

Just as I thought, they swapped Madison for Windsor. Excellent.

For another thought, I think Andrew is going to be trouble for both Corbin and Jessica.

Great work with Pamela, it's very rewarding as a reader to know that you have gotten the scent properly with the hints that authors drop about what is coming. I hope that is also going to be true with that character again!

I'm really hoping I "read the tea leaves" correctly about Kacey and Jess. Because Jess already put the line in the water, and Kacey is maybe going to get assertive about what she wants her sex life to be! I am hoping for a kind of wild scene with the three of them, maybe even with Sam and Mary in the group. There's at least one more chapter, so, fingers crossed!

Thanks again for your work. I did want to say, for me at least, even though they are clearly in love and all that, I would prefer if there was more descriptive prose about the sex still. Yes, they're a couple, and practice coupling regularly, I'd still like to feel more present in the scene. Maybe something like Jess feeling their combined fluid leaking from her pussy and taking a taste before running to clean up? That's my suggestion, rough hewn though it is!