All Comments on 'Fantasy To Finally Reality Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Lucky bugger

That comment just about sums it up, your a lucky bugger. So enjoy yourself :-D~~~~~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
good story

but maybe you should consider getting an editor. Lots of grammatical erros, punctuation errors, as well. Kind of a turn off trying to read it when it's this way.

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