All Comments on 'Fantasy Weekend'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow!! That was a great story. Please write more...

From the start, after reading the first couple of paragraph's, I thought " This is going to be a "great one" (hot & horny story). Who hasn't had a fantasy about spending a weekend with 4 hot chicks like that, and cheerleaders to top it off! What ever extra time it took you to complete this was definitely worth the effort. It was well written. PLease continue, you must! More,more....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot !!

Delicious .. I'm so jealous of Jimmy!

at full mass ===> at full mast (like a flag-pole!)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Awsome!

The whole series was so much fun! I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Fantastic!

amazing series till now...maybe you could introduce a romantic angle into it too...

maybe between ashley and james...!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Damn that was hot!

This whole series was damn 00ber hot!

ClevelandRocks18ClevelandRocks18over 17 years ago
MORE, please!

Outstanding from beginning to end--please write more!

By the way, I hope everyone understands that it is VERY dangerous to wear a cock ring for more than a few minutes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Tastes good but needs more spice

The idea, the story, the events, the detailed description of the actions and all is very nicely put and really interesting.

but the story needed some spices added, like description of deep throat and some ass fucking.

But generally it is nice.

puncturepunctureover 11 years ago

That story was great. Needs to go on but with more of a developing theme. Possible ass fucking but possibly more girls or perhaps their mums or aunts

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awesome story

This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read excellent job

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
alt or additional ending

great story...could have ended with the girls sharing his cum in one way or another

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very good

My only idea would be that James kind of becomes a mascot for the team so he's free to fuck all the girls

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