All Comments on 'Far Away Joe's'

Loved it, and the black-white element made it exciting

Most of your stories have some air of believability but this one was just a little too much. Everyone and everything too perfect. I suspect their farts didn't stink either!

Speaking of stinking: a partnet swap the night after getting married? Yea, real true love - NOT!

I thought this story was different than the stories you have done in the other stories you have written you have mixed some from E&E and and some other different catagories the Group sex was much different than what you have done lately it will take me awhile to get use to the change i hope you wreite more to this storie i would love to see if Joe and Jennie has that baby and Mackie and tag works on theres please write more chapters to this grand story.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

The way you write about the night clubs is right on target

and Jenny and the Girl girl scene with Macki and jenni is incredible so much vibrant loving and feeling i hope you continue with Far Away Joes story continue with Joe and Jenni having there baby and Tag and Macki having theres.

Atlanta,Ga

This is the first bi-racial story I've read online that was not abusive of women and didn't stereotype or disparage people of African origin.

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The quick acceptance of Jennie by all the "friends" was surprising. I continue to be surprised by the speed with which people in you stories develop such deep and life altering relationships.

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I can't say specifically what, but something about your dialog troubles me. That said, I like the story and concept.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

yougot me again. what a story! THANK YOU!

Swinging the night following your wedding? Nah, I don't think so.

Just a fantasy folks.

All depends on who you are with and the feelings you have.

These folks could share - and were OK that it was NOT just sex - in spite of the language used -

They all cared very much for each other and about each others welfare. This seemed much closer to a poly family than simple sex partners. That changes the dynamic and requires a whole new level of faith in the players. Like the Commander Murphy series - the l0ve for another that let's you allow them to meet their needs is not the same as the qualities required to stay there and see or participate in it.

My faith in those around is not high enough to tolerate that with anyone I know currently.

But more power to them - and it read pretty well.

Cheesy piece of shit here. So typical of GreyBuzzard.

Sorry, I just couldn't get into this one. They express their undying and faithful love to one another and say how they are the perfect match for each other. Then they get married and the next night they are sharing and swapping partners???

That seems completely out of character for them and not even remotely believable.

There were just too many character and plotline issues in this story and once again another abrupt and poor ending.

Very liberal/libertine?