All Comments on 'Farewell to the Dancing Man Ch. 11-20'

by Cromagnonman

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Sidney43Sidney43about 12 years ago

This is turning into a pretty good story. I like the transitions from one period of time to the present and also views of the different characters. Nice to see the wayward wife has gotten her priorities straight and is going to tell her husband what went on. From the sudden change in his behavior, I suspect he already knows something, if not pretty much all that has been going on at home while he is at work.

bruce22bruce22about 12 years ago
Yeah Man!

It is complex and interesting as well carefully written.

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
Our cop trulky is a contradictoin

He is good and he has ethics - he ognores them and behaves badly at will - may love her but???

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