All Comments on 'Farmer's Market Lovers'

Looking forward to your next story!! Thank you.

Loved the bit about her breasts feeling like a chicken without the feathers on it, classic.

Read this because I love Farmers' Markets and it was really worth it!

Cheers

Those darn apostrophes...just in case you write another one it's the Farmers' Market.

Hi :)

I liked your story but thought I'd give some constructive criticism.

From a woman's perspective, much more time should have been spent on developing the relationship and characters as there is. The sex is great, but it's kind of rushed through and the story part of it isn't explored enough.

I like the theme's and settings and characters, definitely a good idea! :)

Cheers

Flicka xx

It is an outline at best and the last para is a killer. Also the tenses are mixed up quite a bit. Needs a full remake.

Beautiful

Great characters