All Comments on 'Fashion is Our Name Pt. 01'

Great story. Interesting characters and the narrative flows excellently. Can't wait to see where this goes.

The only niggle I have is the confusion as you change from third person to first, and back again. Is that deliberate, or just poor proofing?

So he has inherited his father's lover, how appropriate! A good father tries to be the best man he can be, and tries to raise his son to be even better. Looks like Adrian is picking up Nicole where his father left off, and is providing even more love and care. Bravo! I appreciate her acknowledgement of the age difference, and am pleased Adrian is smart enough to accept love and romance where he finds it. A very enjoyable love story.

Thank You!

I have read all of your stories. I find that once I get started, I don't want to stop until all chapters have been read. Please keep up the great work. Thank You