All Comments on 'Faster Than DeLight Ch. 00'

So far very interesting, but needed an ending or a hook for the sequel.

Really good start. Please continue this very interesting and erotica story.

You laid out a good premise, but you spent more time describing the politics than the sex! Readers generally want more than "They had sex, and when he was exhausted or bored, he watched them have sex." This almost seems like an outline more than a plot-based story.