All Comments on 'Fatal Alignment Ch. 03'

Another amazing chapter as always! Though it’s been awhile, I’m so glad you continued with this story and I know so many other people are too. I hope no matter what you won’t lose your passion and motivation to continue these magical worlds you’ve built within your writing.

This is what comes from stupid choices, Laiyla. You choose to live 'happilly ever after' with a murdering rapist who was more than happy to enslave and humiliate you, this is what you get. All your indignation now is ridiculous.

I usually leave one or two comments after a story because I feel that the stories are best judged as a whole. But if leaving comments after each chapter will encourage you to continue this story, then I'd happily do so. You are an amazing writer and I love this magical world you've created thus far. I think it's only logical that Adrika should be the embodiment of both light and dark. She is after all, a product of both. And is through the balance of these, like all characters should be, that you get the whole. As always, thank you for writing and I can't wait till your next update.

I can't tell you how happy it makes me that you are continuing this story. Please do not keep us waiting long for the next chapter.

Seeing your note that the comments encouraging you to keep writing this story are motivating and helpful for you will push me to comment on all the chapters from this point on! Your writing is excellent - truly some of the best on this site. I’m excited to get more of Poison Ivy too, but I hope you continue this story! I love the slow burn, and the chemistry/tension between Kill and Adrika is perfect

Thank you for continuing with this tale X

I'm so happy you're continuing this story!! I can't wait to read more! Sooner rather than later I hope!!

A story like this is better for the building tension, don't feel any pressure to rush things. Please just keep writing. I think you have a lot going on here and it's all excellent!

I'm so happy you've continued with this story! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please keep writing!

I have a lot to say but not enough time to say it right now so I'll summarize to this: I've read this chapter like 10 times now and I'm so, so, so excited to see you continue this story. I know I'll be waiting with bated breath for the next installment. <3

Thanks for the update! I love the pacing of this story, and I can’t wait for more!

Loved it. Love you. So happy. Ive been on lit for 10 years. I dont check it much anymore but when I do, it's for you and 3 others with unfinished stories I desperatley want to continue. Please continue!!! 🙏🙏🙏🙏

I'm anxiously waiting next installment. This is written beautifully. I'm well and truly enraptured

This is so good!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!!(: hope all is well

This is amazing so far, loving the slow burn and waiting for what is next. I loved The Seeker also!

I love the way you write, the way you curse, the way you make an art of it. Top 5 writer on Lit. I wish this were your full time job. I hope you come back and finish this œuvre. If is an honor to read your works. We are not worthy.

Please keep writing this one! I really enjoy it!

You're such a gifted writer.. I stumbled upon this series by accident.. Please continue Adrika and Killians story.. Our anticipation to know what will happen next is insane...

I don't know, maybe you're more passionate about the aella/trevino story (which is great btw!) But I'd still prefer for you to finish this one. I mean I know we're not anywhere near the climax of this story yet, but I already love the 2 of them so so much.... Also, totally just a suggestion, but maybe killian doesn't have to hurt adrika as brutally as venlen hurt laiyla in the seeker? Rambling a little here. Love your writing, would love a new chapter of either story, but if I can add my 2 cents, I'd prefer for you to finish this one first before really delving into aella and trevino.

I think about this story a lot and I'm so looking forward to the day that another chapter drops! I check for updates way too often, holding out hope that it might be the day. Just thought I'd drop a friendly line to say that we have not lost interest!

this is incredible, i hope you continue it someday. I read your Poison Ivy a while back and after reading this, I have to say youre a fantastic author. I am so interested in Killian, ahh i can't wait to see smut in this

Please please continue this story, I have been back to re-read it a few times, you are my favourite on Lit!

Please update this sometime before the end of the year. Please. Or convergence or aella's story. I love your writing so much.

I wanna start of with : I absolutely love your writing. What do I know but I think it’s really good.

I am a bit broken hearted to see this last chapter was updated like 9 moths ago so possibly you will not finish this story and I am already in love with the characters. And I want to know how it endss!!

But really write the stories you like writing because I think part of what makes it so good is that you enjoy writing it.

Never post feedback- love this story, too heavy on yourself for negative criticism with its predecessor. Would love to see it finished.

Please don’t stop writing! Have read all your stories and love every one of them. Keep it up!

beautiful! please dont stop writing this one love this story keep writing .finish it as you like whether uts HEA or not

Dying to read more of this. Please continue!! I'm way too invested, and can't forget it. Thankyou for writing, love all your work!

Please finish this story! I’ve read all your stories and absolutely love your writing.

Please keep going! This story has such a great start and I’m already So invested in adrika and Kill!

Please come back to this! I love the story and your writing style!

Oh PLEASE continue. You're a fantastic writer and I'm so invested in this spin off. I loved the original story. I know it's been 2 years. But you have a fan and i sincerely hope you'll come back to Killian and adrika

This story is so good! Please don’t stop!