by Comshaw
Sorry, love your work , and spell check snafu’d you
British Columbia vs Colombia
One is in Canada, one is in South America
U vs O
Great, so he ends up with a cheating pile of human trash... Why the hell would you do that to your protagonist?
So 21 (?) years later he hasn't been in a serious relationship at all, she has cheated on her husband with him, and I am supposed to believe they will live happily ever after? Not much of a romance, more of a long erotic coupling.