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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
nice

except for the adultery incident, nice!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Typo

Sorry, love your work , and spell check snafu’d you

British Columbia vs Colombia

One is in Canada, one is in South America

U vs O

OpenWordsOpenWordsalmost 2 years ago

Great, so he ends up with a cheating pile of human trash... Why the hell would you do that to your protagonist?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So 21 (?) years later he hasn't been in a serious relationship at all, she has cheated on her husband with him, and I am supposed to believe they will live happily ever after? Not much of a romance, more of a long erotic coupling.

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hiking, fishing, outdoor stuff and motorcycles. Nothing like you, the road, the wind in your face and no one to bother you...except the stupid ass people in cars that don't pay attention to what they are doing.

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