All Comments on 'Fate Had a Better Plan'

I liked this a lot...a very romantic short.

I liked the original but i loved this rebirth to the story great job.

Very nicely done! ~ 5+

I love it, true love wins.

While rather too brief, this Romance story is a real tear-jerker, tugging at the heart strings throughout. An intriguing plot is nicely balanced with tender romance, making for a superior love story. (The categorization of this story as "erotic couplings" is rather puzzling, given the overall quality and characteristics of the story).

I agree with anonymous, this should have been in the Romance category. Other than that it was great! There were a few misspellings and such but nothing too distracting. 5 stars.

What a warm and loving story of two step-siblings that were each others first love and as it turned out they there each others one only true love and they lived happily ever after. You just love these kind of stories with happy endings. Well done, gets my 5 star vote.