All Comments on 'Fate Made Amanda My Wife'

Let's see....the question was when did the story move from fact to fiction. I'd say it was about the time the word "guitar" was first used.

Pathetic writing. Maybe the 60's were just a little too good for you.

-- KK

This story lacked depth.

I loved this sweet story! It was descriptive and although simple, still an enjoyable read for me. It had a little bit of characterization, and the spelling and grammar were basically OK. So, y'all, give the writer a break!

For me, where the story seemed to depart from real life was the decision to make a baby. Seemed a little too casual. But hey, isn't this whole site about fantasy & imagination? And I loved the romantic ending and expressions of love.

Thanks, RM, I enjoyed it!

I found your story to be thrilling and a very fun read.Outstanding Work !!!! Keep thrilling us !!!

Thanks for a fun, authentic sounding simple story.

Hey, I'd like to try this method sometime. Make a baby so that I have milk to suck from the breasts and then marry the woman. Fantastic.

Fucking rubbish