All Comments on 'Fated Ch. 07'

Why bother posting snippets on Literotica? This "chapter" has no real substance. Perhaps had you waited to post all the "chapters" as one piece, it might be worth opening up to read.

some times building the suspense and interest is good, would people like the author to write 3-4 chapters at a time and then enter something in a year or two....

don't listen to the morons who say its bad i personally am lovin ur serious so far and plan on reading the rest uv written so far its great taht u havn't made them 2 long yet still manage to capture the essence of a sister-brother couple terrific job

I suggest that there is just a bit too much "respectfully" ... I think we get the picture. We got it in ep 2, or was 3 ... maybe 4 - I think I have lost count.

I love some of your stories - I loved "Eve" for example. But as with one other maker of comments below, this is moving with all the pace of a peripatetic snail! I can't wait until I get to chapter 23, or maybe 24 ...

But thank you anyway, because you do write well. Regards, Michael

5 stars, keep it up.