All Comments on 'Fated Destiny Ch. 02'

The character development of Tom, Anya, and Gretta was good. I like the side track you had them take by solving the mystery of the ghost in the church instead of just jumping right in with the vampire. I must admit that I felt guilty that they were in a church setting. (It must be my Catholic girl background.) Anyway, thanks for continuing, I wasn't sure you were going to, it has been a while. I noticed you also continued with Per. I am going to read that next. You were a busy boy!

I was hoping you would continue this story as well as the Pervikar series. Please don't stop.

I noticed in the latest Rescue submission you said you have stories written but are just a slow typist. I hope you have some more Tom Parta stories as well. I wouldn't mind helping you type! I love this series... just wish it were longer. (oops! Am I supposed to say that to a man?)

Please can we have some more,SOON!!!!

I really like your Fated Destiny series. Please consider continuing it. I noticed the last Per was submitted early October. Maybe you are taking some time to catch us up on Tom? Hopefully....