by Joe456
I enjoyed your story, and I hope you'll keep writing! One thing: Anchorage wasn't founded until 1915. It's a small thing, but it took me right out of the story.
A very different story from the usual stuff here. Nice catholic references, very subtle eroticism, nicely written
I didn't mind the Anchorage anachronism, but I was confused when he was lost in the country - the story jumped a bit too quickly from the warm town to him contemplating death. I wanted some more setting in the wilderness, how he got there, etc.