by acdd123
The next time have richard knocked out and then have a surgeon do an cock reduction to 3 inches that should make Martin very happy.
You keep writing like Richard is a fucking hero or god. I thought you might have been on to something when he was shot but no you went right back to the same old tired shit. The man is no father and the son should have shot his cock off years and girlfriends ago. Your getting boring with this tired shit.
19 chapters in and the same people are still complaining about the story -- that must mean that deep-down, secretly, they love it, just like the rest of us. Keep it up man.
i finger myself everytime i read the next chapter, i would love to meet a richard!!! never stop!!
YEa this story is pure shit.
But at least it started out good Catherine the first women to turn him down. The ego got knocked down a little there.
But in true shit format that we have come to expect from this little fag. The story quickly resumed its usually stink of shit.
Get a life go out and meet some women and 'try' to make them happy
Daddy run over your tricycle with his car when you were a widdle boy author? Did he tell you that you could not light your own sparklers. If you hate your dad that much or if you had a dad that you don't like that much, then you need professional help or watched by the police that you don't do your father some harm.
Daddy run over your tricycle with his car when you were a widdle boy author? Did he tell you that you could not light your own sparklers. If you hate your dad that much or if you had a dad that you don't like that much, then you need professional help or watched by the police that you don't do your father some harm.
Why don't you see if you can actually write something of substance and not 19 chapters of this garbage?? Or is this truly the best you can do? If so, seek some professioinal help you sick, twisted, waste of humanity with "Daddy" issues.
It is not erotic. It is not good writing. There is nothing worthwhile in this drivel whatsoever.
Just kill it now and leave your sick fantasies in your own head.
I thought Richard and this shitty story died, but alas, you and your fucking story are still going. Just like the energizer bunny.
Why doesn't Richard just kill Martin. The way you write, every woman in the man's life would give Richard a medal of some sort for killing him. He could kill him, drag him around on a chain behind a car and every police officer would bow down before him, thank him, and the women officers would fall down and worship him.
Why didn't Richard just demand that his wife abort him when he was conceived, or drown him at birth?
Perhaps if you ever do end this shit, some man that Richard has stolen his bride away from will catch him asleep or drugged, cut off his only asset as you call it, and stuff it down his fucking pompous assed throat.