All Comments on 'Father's Day'

Great vignette, love it! 5*

Great incorporation of pee without making it a focus. Such a wonderful real turn on without overdoing it.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Wish you were my daughter. Short and erotic

Golf is so very unsexy, yet the warmup to the game is fabulous. I suspect it's rare to have a daughter who welcomes being waked at 5:30AM in order to give a blowjob during her morning pee. As we know from collecting though (stamps, coins, artworks), the more rare something is, the more valuable it is! 5*

But the fact that she had a boyfriend, instead of being exclusively his, was a serious detraction from the heat of the story.

Great short story! Loved it! Five stars! Reminds me of the apparently apocryphal Johnny Carson and Winnie Palmer exchange on Johnny's TV show. Johnny asked Winnie (wife of famous golfer Arnold Palmer) if she did anything to help Arnie before a golf tournament. She said that she kissed his (golf) balls. Johnny said something to the effect of "I bet that makes his putter stand up!"

Enjoy your stories very much , the father daughter the most . Thanks

Or the lack of it. Unreal and written without any real thought. e.g. Why did he get himself fully ready to go before waking her?

Now I need a golfing Daddy!

Another Mitchie masterpiece.

But I Liked It ! ! !

Maybe he wanted to let her sleep as long as possible? Maybe he was worried about his wife seeing him walk buck naked to their daughter’s room? Maybe the action of his baby girl undressing him adds to the eroticism of the BJ? A lot of credible explanations for getting dressed first. But haters gonna hate!

Great story well told and can picture the father getting dressed and acting as if he was leaving to play an early round of golf but stealing into his daughter's bedroom for a quick blowjob. I don't really follow golf but laughed at some of the double entendres like reducing strokes and also understand the mentality that a golfer will do anything to reduce their score including a blow job from their daughter.

Love to see this continue

Lovely as always... thank you!

Reading your short works is always a treat. It's amazing how you pack so much into such a short space. It's a real talent(or you've worked at it; practice makes perfect), and the impact is far greater than if this had gone four pages.

The eroticism is stunning. I love how you describe the action, and I especially enjoy reading the woman's point of view. It's something I obviously can't experience, but reading stories such as this helps my own writing by allowing me to see the "other side."

Nicely done.

I made it all the way through without stroking my cock. Its so hard now I must take care of it. Makes me want to take up golf again.

Nice quickie, in style and plot! Very enjoyable story!

I mostly fantasize about mom/son stuff. But a suppose that daughters think about their dads too. I really like your writing style.

Lucky dad!

As always a great story.

What a hot, beautiful relationship between dad and daughter. Loved it.

Another amazing tale! Lovely!

its a good writing and descriptive one . do read more from the author

Short and hot. Love the routine. Keep it up!

Lovely, amazing, short and sweet :)

good english, no misspellings or malapropisms i tripped over (i´m not perfect!)

don´t remember about the sex. read yesterday. don´t remember! i´m 81.

keep at it.

Such a warmth in how she pleasures her dad....A real wake up for me as a dad to how much love a daughter can have! Thank you

Consise and Wonderful. Now this is a sexuual short story.

Just like all good Daddy/daughter relationships. Well written. Thank you

super little story and Daughter

Loved the story and gave it 5 stars. i am an avid golfer and i am sure this pre-golf routine would straighten out my golf game. Great job mitchie. i really loved this, it was well written

5 Stars Very well written and very ... thought invoking. I cant wait to read more of your work!

Love this shorty story. UAlbanyGirl518 has a great writing style. Really gets my attention……

so turned on by it. 5 stars.

So fluid and realistic, nice flow and no wasted words. Can’t wait to read more!

Daddy should have drank from the Golden shower .I love to piss in my brother's mouth

Love it when a woman purposely spreads her legs apart as she pisses so you can see her stream.

Great story, I loved how it started, she is half asleep but knows what is expected of her by dad and she is ready to oblige him...

"Father's Day:" - Using the stories golfing analogy, the round is a shorrrrt stroke, first-hole game,blowjob played (ergo, filled) by a father's rigid nine iron. Father made no attempt to play (ergo, fill) his daughter's second hole. That's the hole where daughter's "course" is barebacked with father's nine iron, and her fed bag (ergo, womb) is planted with billions of wee seedlings!! Their first "round" cum-sucking is fully sated by her profound blowjob! Their second round cum-planting will be her woman hole consummated by her father's nine-hole iron--where she will be impregnated. Their future two--round, cum-jamming's will be ripe and fruitful. Their future fairway mergers will be long, fruitful will be lastingly permanent rounds (ergo, decades)!

The wife/mother matriarch, being permanently absent, plays her own "rounds of (golf) balls" elsewhere in the universe!.