All Comments on 'Fatigue'

Entertaining and very well-written. I truly enjoyed the story. The length was necessary for the setup at the end.

They had agreed-upon rules and she broke every one of them. No love, respect or trust in that relationship all because of an irrational bitch.

Ed

What is that old saying..."give them an inch and they expect and take a mile." I read this twice and my conclusion is Joe started and continued to chase his dick the whole time. Only scene I liked was when Malcolm got destroyed in the altercation.

Liked it except of course the cause of the breakdown of the marriage, it the height of stupidity to violate your own marriage, it will ALWAYS come back and bite you in the ass.

How can anyone finish this?!

Wimpy cuck?!

Alpha - beta no he is All the Way to zeta

This one bordered on putrid. The MC needed to be aborted at conception. U don’t allow this level of stupid to be born. Now he needs a lobotomy minimum!

Don't know what the hell to think about this'un!

Sorry, but one is psychotic - and the other is nuts ......

Malcom could not prove he didn't initiate force. No other eye witness and Malcom was bigger with more formal training. No DA would charge that, and a civil jury wouldn't see that fag as a victim. Moreover, does anyone think Malcom would want the world to know he's a sissy? The MC isn't remotely plausible as a character. The entire story is grossly implausible.