All Comments on 'Fay Bargains'

Cant read this. Did a weird job constructng sentences. Didnt care for it. See how do you like it?

Yet another time seeing the story tags, before I read the story, would have saved the author another score of 1...

Not having to skip to the end to see comments and tags would be nice. If I'd seen the transgender tag right at the start I never would have bothered reading this story. As it was I got to the end and thought, it hardly seemed to be mind control, and the main character forced to change gender and bear a child was irritating, not entertaining.

Assuming I made such a stupid deal, I'd have slit my own damn throat right there in the Lady's office and flipped her the bird. Get a son from my corpse!