All Comments on 'Faye's Fecundity for Fetish'

Lesbian or fetish is where this belongs, clearly. Not good.

Fantastic well written story, please keep going... although cliff hangers like that.... naughty!!! But nice xxxx

A good first effort! Watch your tense changes; there was a lot of mix of past and present in this. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

The story is good. Nothing vengeful or hating within the text common with so many stories featured here. The annoying thing is the sloppy, lazy execution. Simple things like the wrong words cropping up. Spell check won’t tell you if have a word out of context. The ideas and talent are there. No refine them to make yourself a good writer.

Great start. Hope there is a part 2.

Why isn't this in the lesbian category? And why write about a lesbian bitch cuckolding her husband with a fucked up butch dyke bitch.

Excellent! Loved it!

38G breasts !!

I stopped reading at 38G breasts. Not my thing.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Loving lesbians or with 38Gs, loving cows.

a bit too illiterate for the common reader to enjoy.

if someone could make sense of the following, you'll understand the frustration, as it was cut from the story:

[Sarah then ran her hands around the curve of Faye's heavy breasts and then slid them back up until Sarah how old her neck, her thumbs aligning with Faye's jawline.]

A few too many errors. whether it is auto spell correct or what?

Ok story line.

38G is my wife's actual bra size. But I understand it seems unrealistic.

Sorry for all the errors, I tried to edit it myself but I must have skipped past several things. As for the referenced section in one of the comments, I did feel strangely about writing that and I should have edited it because it is not clear and there is a typo.

I appreciate everyone's comments. I wrote this story within 12 hours, on my phone, and did not take the time to edit it. I'm glad it's been received well and I will endeavor to do better in the future. I appreciate the feedback.

Nice first story.