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BraveStarrBraveStarrover 12 years ago
Too short!

A brilliant story but way too short! I adore interracial love stories and the fact that this couple have run away so they can be together was thrilling. But please, write a few more chapters. A baby would be nice and cement their loving relationship further.

Keep up the excellent work and I'll be reading more.

BraveStarr

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