All Comments on 'Fear and Loving'

Keep writing please.

great story, though too short. I hope you continue this story into series

A good start but as the others said, too short. The story itself is very promising and I look forward to reading more however I'd advise you to get someone to proofread it for you as there were a lot of spelling errors.

on your first story to Lit. It is a nice stand alone story but at the same time could easily become a series. Either way, I like it enough to read whatever you write next.

Again congrats on your first submission. I wish you luck w/your future storytelling.

This is great! I don't know what your original intentions were, if this was a lone story or you'd planned to expand it; either way I beg you to continue with the plot! this was really good

Good start. I hope this is the beginning of the story.

Please keep this story going! I think this is a great start and really look forward to more, hopefully!

congratulations on your first submission. I hope that you continue on with the story.

I didn't really plan on this one being an extended story. But because you asked nicely, I'll see what I can do about continuing it.

I love yours, all of them so far. Can't wait for you to continue them and read more!

Demons seem to be your thing dear, I've read every one of your entries and they're all amazing! Do please keep writing, you're quite good :)

Forced submission to a gentle master, just perfect!

Please more!!

Please don't forget about this story. Please please please write another chapter. PLEASE!

Hello, everyone!

First, let me apologize for the wait and confusion regarding this story. In all honesty, this was one of my first submissions and wasn't really intended to have a sequel. However, so many of you have been requesting that I continue that I did take a shot at chapter 2. I have about 10 pages written out, but at this point I'm unsure of how I want the story to continue. I apologize again: I DO have chapter 2 started, but I'm stuck.

Which leads me to add this: For those of you asking about continuing this story, if you have an idea or concept that you think might go well in the second chapter, by all means tell me. I'm at a roadblock on this one, so ideas and suggestions are welcomed. I will ask, for those of you who do send ideas, please keep them within the storyline. This story is about demons - suggestions about robots, aliens, werewolves or Street Fighter probably won't be added into the story (sorry!).

So that's where I'm at. Feel free to send me your thoughts, suggestions or.rage-fueled rants about this story anytime.

Yours,

Kindasortacrazy

the only thing that surprises me is the mention of his cock size while flaccid...12"??? really??? then she is able to take it all without being in agony??? for her first time???

i would have imagined such a piece to put her into unconsciousness within minutes because of the pain. other than that, just an editor would have been nice.

More please!!!!!