All Comments on 'February 1978 in the Bible Belt'

by YDB95

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avatarofenlightenmentavatarofenlightenmentover 3 years ago

well written soap opera. erotic, too.

mfr60mfr60over 3 years ago

I am not a literature buff, never will be. I like stories like this, straightforward, showing human feelings and situations, whether fictitious or not. Well done

MaonaighMaonaighover 3 years ago
First rate

The standard of your writing must be quite high because I found I was getting angry at the bigotry within a few paragraphs. A first-rate piece of work. There is one small editing error on the first page: Father says "Have Peter and Amanda arrived yet?"/

"I don't think so," replied Amanda..." You were probably typing too quickly---these little mistakes are easy to make.

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago

A lovely love story! Well done and thank you for sharing this with us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Time and place.

You really caught the mood of that era. Lovely story. And hot enough, too. 😉

vanmyers86vanmyers86over 3 years ago

Terrific writing, as always, and excellent handling of the time and place setting. I got caught up in the tension of what would happen, always a sign of a well-crafted tale. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Truth be told

Truth be told, it has changed very little. Lesbian's are a bit more accepted than gay men, especially if neither true to play the butch type. But gays and transsexuals.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent story telling.

You built the tension the women were facing so well I scanned through the sex to find out if they would get safely away. Well done!

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Not Too Much Drama...

...but a lot of tension. I was expecting them to have some confrontation with the parents. Well written and ratcheted up that tension nicely.

How about a sequel to show how they got on?

5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dialogue that matters - not just words for the sake of filling out a page.

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