by BeBopper99
This version written by real wimp. She was already perfect cheater. Why stay with her
Nah, hard pressed to stay when she was agreeing to him up next week with him Even after that scene.
In this one, better NOT to have that if they stay together. If you out that in... Staying for the kids is stupid... It'll screw them up worse often times. No role model for actual marriage
With decent though. I enjoyed it until the end
Can’t any writer here give the guys a set of balls he doesn’t lose to the wife? Just a poor wimp. Staying for the children. Total load of crap writers use to close off a story quickly. A hateful household is not best for the children. Trying having a couple if you do t believe me. 1 star
Staying in a messed up marriage “for the kids” does the kids no favors. My parents tried that and it was a miserable 2 years till they finally gave it up. The pain isn’t so sharp anymore, but I doubt I will ever establish a close connection with either of my parents.
This is one of the worst Feb's I've read so far and what's all this 'Marky' crap? Good job he turned the scoring off is all I can say.
The only part of this version of the February Sucks saga that I liked was the ending with Lavallemerde being taken out by an act of vengeance.
After the texts she and Dee send each other, she accepting to go to Paris with lover boy for a week, he still forgave her? Really?
Ok, to be honest it was a little too easy, if this was all Linda dancing with him to make her friends jealous, how come she was willing to go off with
Mark after he was arrested? It didn't sound to me like Linda had learned any lesson to be honest.
I think it would have taken a lot more work on her part to make this work, you can earn grace but it needs to be earned as well as given. Her display on the floor didn't quite show much remote or understanding , just sounded like trying to evade consequences.
Premeditated = divorce
Her respect is gone and that doesn't come back
This also shows why GNOs are bullshit, and why you can't let your girl hang with sluts
You took that one in a different direction, and it was a great story. Very creative.
Well this added nothing to the dreck mountain of rehashed hashery tacked on to this most desperately over hashed story.
You can can kiss my hash!
I like it. One thing I never understood was how Jim just let Linda get up and go dance with the asshole. Jim did not do that in this story and showed a nice set of balls right at the start.
Linda was planning to go to Paris with Mark the following weekend and got caught at it! She will ALWAYS be unforgivable.
I can't say this was a faithful adaptation of the original, but at this point, those have been completely overdone. This felt like you were almost going for the full crackfic treatment, but stopped short. Kind of wish you had just gone full ham on it.
I liked it well enough to have given it 4 stars if voting were possible. At least Linda learned her lesson, and Dee got what she deserved...a divorce.
Please can I wake up some day and not see another of these stupid Feb. Sucks stories?
I see some of the negative comments and think they're unwarrented. You wrote a good story along the F.S. lines. Often women do plan and scheme behind your back with other women. It happens far more than we think it does and it doesn't involved NFL athletes but coworkers, business owners and such.
Good that you wrote a story where the Good Guys win without too much mahem!!!
Didn’t think the husband could be written as more of a wimp than in the other stories. Good job!! He truly is what readers here seem to classify as a full blown WAAC job (wimp ass castrated cuckold). What a terrible way to live having to track your wife for even a second never mind the rest of m of a miserable life. As usual your writing is top drawer. Extremely well
paced and the a wonderful balance between dialogue and narrative. Full 5&FAV!!!
A broken home usually means broken children ...what horseshit!!! Staying with a disrespectful cheating whore slut means broken children. Staying for the children is never a reason for staying. Bounce the whore and move on. Her story about how she wasn't going to have sex with him..is just that...a story.
"I've never seen that side of you before," - Maybe because he's never seen the slut side of her before.
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"Mark asked me to dance with him, and he was such a nice gentleman." - He didn't JUST ask her to dance. The "gentleman" insulted Jim and announced that he'd be bringing Linda home the next day.
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If Dave had the knife, why was there still one knife per person on the table?
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Would have been a three if you allowed scoring.
Really like "Pinto931 " comments. They describe perfectly the character you created. This has been one of the best endings to what has become the go to for another ending. Great characters, although you never called the ex Army vet by name but you definitely gave him a new attitude.
Fairly original take.
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Don’t understand why he still didn’t dump the bitch. Her phone proved that she was absolutely going to fuck tne guy without remorse.
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3 ***
The valley of shit? Priceless. Good story. Linda would be on a very short leash. Perhaps required puppy play twice a week. 5 stars.
Wow.
So called toxic masculinity allover the place.
As if only violence could solve problems.
Stories like this make us men look bad.
Luckily there are still some that are strong, but prefer to use their brains as well.
I completely agree with the comment left by looking4it. The planning beforehand changes the entire outlook of the story. 2.5* at best.
All the wife's excuses were pure lies! She was ready to go to Paris with the Asshole, even after everything that went down. No way would I have taken her back.
Kind of ho hum actually. So many of these around and many better than this.
The author wants the praise, but afraid of getting blind-sided on the score. There were many stories written after George Anderson dropped the basis for this story on us, and I think I have read most of them. In my opinion this one is a 3 at best.
brutal. not bad or wrong, just brutal. I liked it. Quick thinking on Jim's part. They used to give stars out for good stories..........? Thanks.
The BEAR
Good enuf version, i do enjoy when marky suffers some form of grievous bodily harm
A real man will take the high ground as in this story. Most Anonymous comments have no concept of the difficulty of writing. Excellent effort, five stars. Grace or mercy is a sign of the quality of an individual.
5 stars! Just saying. Original and well written. Thank you for adding to the FS universe.
Skub,
Yeah 3.75 is about my limit unless I’m familiar with the author. Still deciding what I think about this one. Sure wouldn’t have had the last baby.
5/5 Stars. Oh… wait… the ratings are not available at the moment. Shame. Of all the versions, this is very much how I would see myself handling things. Yanking my wife back down to her seat when Asshole invited her to dance.… dealing with Asshole in the bar… exposing Dee as a slut and humiliating her verbally… hustling my wife out of the bar and up to the hotel room… ripping Linda’s phone from her hand and reading her emails and texts… Everything is how I’d see myself handling things… Right up until the point that I read about the planning that went into the evening, and finally after reading that his wife was replying to the text saying that she’d go with Asshole to Paris. After reading everything on the phone, at that point it would have been a divorce for me. No matter how much she begged. No matter what kind of epiphany she had. Divorce would be the only acceptable ending for me. Again, great story!!! BRB
An umpteenth attempt to sell the idea that a cheated-cucked husband should take his cheating-whore wife back for the "best interests" of their children. The only best interest in these cases is that of the slut betrayer wife, that don't want the inevitable divorce and let the world knows what kind of a whore she is. Just one of the too many unbelievable cheating-cuck "alternative" feb-suks versions.
The knife was self defense. This didn't happen in a government school where the useless, woketard "highly trained education professionals " have abolished the right of self defense so that a kid defending himself from a bully is punishment for defending himself. Consequently, the bit about Dave and the knife was irrelevant.
There was no basis for forgiveness. Linda even continued to plot to fuck around after she was caught. That drops this to a 1.
So all her pleading to him was about just dancing and rubbing it in her friends face. No sex. But this guy doesn't tell her to her face that she said she would go to Paris the next week when Mark asks her? How does that not get mentioned and considered? She did NOT have an epiphany. She played the cuck to the max.
I see.my first comment is gone, so I will try again. This is a welcome new wrinkle, which is true of all the recent ones. It is also a solid four stars.
JPB NOT BOB
Another cuck-raac fantasy with the usual husband acting without a male brain. Tons of these already here.
Just another fempov promotion for the irrealistic free-cheating-without-consequences. This is more a fempov fairytale for the slut wife and hell for the sheep husband.
The line "Yes, we're still together. Why did I stay? The primary consideration were the children. A broken home usually means broken children." is almost always false.
Children will live better with separated parents, living a new more stable life, than within a family destroyed by an irresponsible and immature betrayer wife.
An umpteenth highly irrealistic RAAC in line with the endless fetish-cuck bombing. Nothing new.
Wonderful, 10 stars! Asshole finally got his, and his cronies paid, too. Dee, the whore, didn't fair well, either! NICE!!
Started out as a 5+ then disintigrated to a 1. There was little doubt the lying slut would be in Paris the next week. Why you wimped him down to a life with a cheating whore is known only to you!
A different version to the same useless story. What happens next, is Marc caught having sex with an animal? Or getting one of the husband to allow him to have anal sex?
too put this tired old nag back in the barn and to bed! No stars.
BRAVO!!! Finally an ending I can identify with; I loved it. If you were open for grading, five stars for sure.
What I find fascinating is that, socioeconomically, men tend to marry down while women tend to marry up yet 90% of divorces are filed by women.
I've been waiting on this variant and it's good, but it was apparent she intended to go to Paris with Marc, so she had intent even AFTER everything that happened. So I would not have stayed with her.
Just for the record, and speaking as a person whose parents stayed together for the kids, it was pure hell and we kids more often than not were the victims of substantial collateral damage. When they finally did divorce, life got a LOT better for all involved.