All Comments on 'February Sucks Only If You Let It'

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AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Never to be trusted again

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

This version written by real wimp. She was already perfect cheater. Why stay with her

Lawrie1941Lawrie1941about 2 months ago

Absolutely pathetic effort, with this story line you will never succeed

AllNigherAllNigher2 months ago

Nah, hard pressed to stay when she was agreeing to him up next week with him Even after that scene.

In this one, better NOT to have that if they stay together. If you out that in... Staying for the kids is stupid... It'll screw them up worse often times. No role model for actual marriage

With decent though. I enjoyed it until the end

RePhilRePhil2 months ago

Can’t any writer here give the guys a set of balls he doesn’t lose to the wife? Just a poor wimp. Staying for the children. Total load of crap writers use to close off a story quickly. A hateful household is not best for the children. Trying having a couple if you do t believe me. 1 star

SeaChangerSeaChanger2 months ago

Very nice ... first one to stand up to Mark right away.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Staying in a messed up marriage “for the kids” does the kids no favors. My parents tried that and it was a miserable 2 years till they finally gave it up. The pain isn’t so sharp anymore, but I doubt I will ever establish a close connection with either of my parents.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

This is one of the worst Feb's I've read so far and what's all this 'Marky' crap? Good job he turned the scoring off is all I can say.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

The only part of this version of the February Sucks saga that I liked was the ending with Lavallemerde being taken out by an act of vengeance.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

After the texts she and Dee send each other, she accepting to go to Paris with lover boy for a week, he still forgave her? Really?

DadieODadieO2 months ago

Another good rewrite of February. Thanks for your creativity.

RimmerdalRimmerdal2 months ago

Hmm no voting for this weakness. 2*s at best and that's stretching it.

njlaurennjlauren2 months ago

Ok, to be honest it was a little too easy, if this was all Linda dancing with him to make her friends jealous, how come she was willing to go off with

Mark after he was arrested? It didn't sound to me like Linda had learned any lesson to be honest.

I think it would have taken a lot more work on her part to make this work, you can earn grace but it needs to be earned as well as given. Her display on the floor didn't quite show much remote or understanding , just sounded like trying to evade consequences.

James G 5James G 52 months ago

Premeditated = divorce

Her respect is gone and that doesn't come back

This also shows why GNOs are bullshit, and why you can't let your girl hang with sluts

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Just another cuck finding an excuse to keep a slut.

26thNC26thNC2 months ago

You took that one in a different direction, and it was a great story. Very creative.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Pussy

premshankerpremshanker3 months ago

Usual 'stale' reuse ,UN-stimulating episode,wastage of 'space' and 'paper'

FantasyTrainFantasyTrain3 months ago

Pussed out in the end. NO BALLS!

clarkgarbleclarkgarble3 months ago

Well this added nothing to the dreck mountain of rehashed hashery tacked on to this most desperately over hashed story.

You can can kiss my hash!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Karma at work. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I really liked this version. Thanks for creating it and posting it.

Fjmax6Fjmax63 months ago

I like it. One thing I never understood was how Jim just let Linda get up and go dance with the asshole. Jim did not do that in this story and showed a nice set of balls right at the start.

Grant_GlapsvidhrsonGrant_Glapsvidhrson3 months ago

I'm favoriting this and give you an honorary 5 Stars!!!

Waldteufel61Waldteufel613 months ago

Sloppy work ⭐️⭐️

MarkT63MarkT633 months ago

I love the ending for Mark...

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I understand why you turned scoring off. 2*.

muskyboymuskyboy3 months ago

Linda was planning to go to Paris with Mark the following weekend and got caught at it! She will ALWAYS be unforgivable.

AethurAethur3 months ago

I can't say this was a faithful adaptation of the original, but at this point, those have been completely overdone. This felt like you were almost going for the full crackfic treatment, but stopped short. Kind of wish you had just gone full ham on it.

KirkelKirkel3 months ago

5 Stars from me

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Another tale over done!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I liked it well enough to have given it 4 stars if voting were possible. At least Linda learned her lesson, and Dee got what she deserved...a divorce.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

One of the better versions.

MartyMartiniMartyMartini3 months ago

Please can I wake up some day and not see another of these stupid Feb. Sucks stories?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Trite

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I see some of the negative comments and think they're unwarrented. You wrote a good story along the F.S. lines. Often women do plan and scheme behind your back with other women. It happens far more than we think it does and it doesn't involved NFL athletes but coworkers, business owners and such.

Good that you wrote a story where the Good Guys win without too much mahem!!!

Trc2003Trc20033 months ago

It's pity we can't vote.. 6 stars for a really fun new take

RePhilRePhil3 months ago

Oops no star scoring. Fav and Follow then

RePhilRePhil3 months ago

Didn’t think the husband could be written as more of a wimp than in the other stories. Good job!! He truly is what readers here seem to classify as a full blown WAAC job (wimp ass castrated cuckold). What a terrible way to live having to track your wife for even a second never mind the rest of m of a miserable life. As usual your writing is top drawer. Extremely well

paced and the a wonderful balance between dialogue and narrative. Full 5&FAV!!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A broken home usually means broken children ...what horseshit!!! Staying with a disrespectful cheating whore slut means broken children. Staying for the children is never a reason for staying. Bounce the whore and move on. Her story about how she wasn't going to have sex with him..is just that...a story.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103x3 months ago

"I've never seen that side of you before," - Maybe because he's never seen the slut side of her before.

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"Mark asked me to dance with him, and he was such a nice gentleman." - He didn't JUST ask her to dance. The "gentleman" insulted Jim and announced that he'd be bringing Linda home the next day.

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If Dave had the knife, why was there still one knife per person on the table?

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Would have been a three if you allowed scoring.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Really like "Pinto931 " comments. They describe perfectly the character you created. This has been one of the best endings to what has become the go to for another ending. Great characters, although you never called the ex Army vet by name but you definitely gave him a new attitude.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Fairly original take.

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Don’t understand why he still didn’t dump the bitch. Her phone proved that she was absolutely going to fuck tne guy without remorse.

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3 ***

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The valley of shit? Priceless. Good story. Linda would be on a very short leash. Perhaps required puppy play twice a week. 5 stars.

RosenkavalierRosenkavalier3 months ago

Wow.

So called toxic masculinity allover the place.

As if only violence could solve problems.

Stories like this make us men look bad.

Luckily there are still some that are strong, but prefer to use their brains as well.

sf_operative63sf_operative633 months ago

Not as good as the other GA aligned stories..

DOL

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I completely agree with the comment left by looking4it. The planning beforehand changes the entire outlook of the story. 2.5* at best.

silverthorne16silverthorne163 months ago

All the wife's excuses were pure lies! She was ready to go to Paris with the Asshole, even after everything that went down. No way would I have taken her back.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Great little story!

xtc5xtc53 months ago

enjoyable for the most part.

Thanks

114FSO114FSO3 months ago

Great Ending.

AnotherChapterAnotherChapter3 months ago

Kind of ho hum actually. So many of these around and many better than this.

Chimo1961Chimo19613 months ago

Any version where Mark gets shorts an automatic 5.

robinhodrobinhod3 months ago

Added nothing. Why bother?

pepepilotpepepilot3 months ago

The author wants the praise, but afraid of getting blind-sided on the score. There were many stories written after George Anderson dropped the basis for this story on us, and I think I have read most of them. In my opinion this one is a 3 at best.

KRD19254KRD192543 months ago

5****** Hooyah

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShades3 months ago

Good job with the story. Thanks for your writing.

LT56linebackerLT56linebacker3 months ago

brutal. not bad or wrong, just brutal. I liked it. Quick thinking on Jim's part. They used to give stars out for good stories..........? Thanks.

The BEAR

Rocky62Rocky623 months ago

Good enuf version, i do enjoy when marky suffers some form of grievous bodily harm

Hardday1953Hardday19533 months ago

A real man will take the high ground as in this story. Most Anonymous comments have no concept of the difficulty of writing. Excellent effort, five stars. Grace or mercy is a sign of the quality of an individual.

BSreaderBSreader3 months ago
Well

Yet another take.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

One of the better 5 star versions

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Love it. Humor and define nice win the day in this version.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

5 stars! Just saying. Original and well written. Thank you for adding to the FS universe.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Nice paragraph. I hope you feel better now

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Amusing. But, come on authors. Let this story line die the death it deserves.

Schwanze1Schwanze13 months ago

Skub,

Yeah 3.75 is about my limit unless I’m familiar with the author. Still deciding what I think about this one. Sure wouldn’t have had the last baby.

Schwanze1Schwanze13 months ago

Hmmm. Good luck buddy

Billy_Ray_BanBilly_Ray_Ban3 months ago

5/5 Stars. Oh… wait… the ratings are not available at the moment. Shame. Of all the versions, this is very much how I would see myself handling things. Yanking my wife back down to her seat when Asshole invited her to dance.… dealing with Asshole in the bar… exposing Dee as a slut and humiliating her verbally… hustling my wife out of the bar and up to the hotel room… ripping Linda’s phone from her hand and reading her emails and texts… Everything is how I’d see myself handling things… Right up until the point that I read about the planning that went into the evening, and finally after reading that his wife was replying to the text saying that she’d go with Asshole to Paris. After reading everything on the phone, at that point it would have been a divorce for me. No matter how much she begged. No matter what kind of epiphany she had. Divorce would be the only acceptable ending for me. Again, great story!!! BRB

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Where are the RAAC and cuck tags ?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

An umpteenth attempt to sell the idea that a cheated-cucked husband should take his cheating-whore wife back for the "best interests" of their children. The only best interest in these cases is that of the slut betrayer wife, that don't want the inevitable divorce and let the world knows what kind of a whore she is. Just one of the too many unbelievable cheating-cuck "alternative" feb-suks versions.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The knife was self defense. This didn't happen in a government school where the useless, woketard "highly trained education professionals " have abolished the right of self defense so that a kid defending himself from a bully is punishment for defending himself. Consequently, the bit about Dave and the knife was irrelevant.

There was no basis for forgiveness. Linda even continued to plot to fuck around after she was caught. That drops this to a 1.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Not good. He should have divorced Linda.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

So all her pleading to him was about just dancing and rubbing it in her friends face. No sex. But this guy doesn't tell her to her face that she said she would go to Paris the next week when Mark asks her? How does that not get mentioned and considered? She did NOT have an epiphany. She played the cuck to the max.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I see.my first comment is gone, so I will try again. This is a welcome new wrinkle, which is true of all the recent ones. It is also a solid four stars.

JPB NOT BOB

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Another good one

LoriRobinsonGaLoriRobinsonGa3 months ago

Ditto StrappySandals.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Another cuck-raac fantasy with the usual husband acting without a male brain. Tons of these already here.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Just another fempov promotion for the irrealistic free-cheating-without-consequences. This is more a fempov fairytale for the slut wife and hell for the sheep husband.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

HELLLLLLL YES

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The line "Yes, we're still together. Why did I stay? The primary consideration were the children. A broken home usually means broken children." is almost always false.

Children will live better with separated parents, living a new more stable life, than within a family destroyed by an irresponsible and immature betrayer wife.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

An umpteenth highly irrealistic RAAC in line with the endless fetish-cuck bombing. Nothing new.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Awful

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Wonderful, 10 stars! Asshole finally got his, and his cronies paid, too. Dee, the whore, didn't fair well, either! NICE!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

2*

kirei8kirei83 months ago

Started out as a 5+ then disintigrated to a 1. There was little doubt the lying slut would be in Paris the next week. Why you wimped him down to a life with a cheating whore is known only to you!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Dave got Jima back is the best moment.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A different version to the same useless story. What happens next, is Marc caught having sex with an animal? Or getting one of the husband to allow him to have anal sex?

bhill8671bhill86713 months ago
It is long past time,

too put this tired old nag back in the barn and to bed! No stars.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

5 stars

MarmadukephuknukleMarmadukephuknukle3 months ago

BRAVO!!! Finally an ending I can identify with; I loved it. If you were open for grading, five stars for sure.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

What I find fascinating is that, socioeconomically, men tend to marry down while women tend to marry up yet 90% of divorces are filed by women.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I've been waiting on this variant and it's good, but it was apparent she intended to go to Paris with Marc, so she had intent even AFTER everything that happened. So I would not have stayed with her.

Just for the record, and speaking as a person whose parents stayed together for the kids, it was pure hell and we kids more often than not were the victims of substantial collateral damage. When they finally did divorce, life got a LOT better for all involved.

DessertmanDessertman3 months ago

One of poorest versions of this tale.

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