by Stardog Champion
I've read quite a few stories on this site, but I always come back to this series, chapter 3 in particular. Your attention to detail and descriptive vocabulary really makes this story stand apart from the rest. I just wish there was one or two more chapters following the girls afternoon with the mechanics. Regardless, you can count me a fan eager for more.
I loved all three chapters. Is there more to this particular story? It would be great if there were.