by VitalWalt
I would like to see more words of encouragement from readers to continue writing and posting this story.
Hey VitalWalt:
I love your approach to this story. I love the fact that there's a little bit of everything for people. There's a female protagonist. There's a BBC, and the writing is probably my favourite part of this. I love the fact that it's written well, chock full of descriptions.
Please continue. I really want to know what other 'lies' she wants to mention about. ;) But you have an awesome start.