by Rajasslover
Let the story go on its pace. Sorry to tell you, you went like you are going to miss a train if not finished quickly. Go slow and let this thing to build up
What a load of crap.
After 2 paragraphs I was distracted by hearing Apu from the Quick-E Mart narrating this steaming pile of fetid crap.
This had potential but you ruined it with broken English and an urge to finish like a teenager who just got dads Penthouse magazine and wanted to get off before dad realized it was missing.
I suggest you find an editor who can help you write coherent sentences and keep your story moving at a sensible pace.
It's not 20 minutes I wont get back, its 3 paragraphs and a huge load of dog turds on the carpet.
Try again.
You just wrote fiction. No aunt sleeps with her 18 Y.O nephew as a lover and if she does, she's a slut. Most boring story ever!
It's a real story and its always like that. You never get everything you need at first basis and my Aunt is slut for me and my friend. Read my next story
Very good story and detailed. Love how this is a true story, makes it more sexy. Looking forward for part 2 ;)
It takes all kinds to make the world. This world is a happier place thanks to women like aunt Soheela! She is a keeper. Full stop. Period.
Awesome story.. it's so real that makes horny.. salute your aunt. Please deliver my kiss to your aunt's ass
Did she definitely consent, or was she too afraid or anxiously awkward to speak up? You'd be surprised by how taken aback ppl can be, especially women who might be afraid of a stronger man, becoming rougher if angry
I think she was consent, I guess she liked it because there is also a bitch living inside her