by Extreme Bohunk
This was VERY well written - a good mix of discription, action, and a tantalyizing bit of very well placed humor. Dr. Probem?! Fabulous! Please continue this story... I'd like to know what became of Bob and Tanya!
Mmmm...that was great. You should really continue this story and tell us about her first time. Maybe you could include a little tryst between the real Bob and the two girls.
I like the way this story was put together. It was totally believable and I loved reading it. Very good job.