All Comments on 'Female Masturbation, Japanese Style'

Incredibly erotic story! I could feel his hands on me, drenching my pussy! I can't wait to read about the second encounter. Keep up the great work.

That was the most amazing story. Where can I get a massage like that? This story had me SO wet I couldn't stand it! Can't wait to read about Eriko's return!!

That was so good , please write another about her next visit. You have no idea how horny i got reading it , please do another.

Amazing. Never would have thought of it myself.

Awarded Highest Rated Story in "Toys and Masturbation" CATEGORY FOR APRIL 2006.

Your plot development, character development and general writing are good, but baby you have GOT to get a thesaurus. If I have to read the words "jiggle," "bowed," or "mmmeeewwww" once more I'm going to have to poke my eyes out. Plus so much of your story is the same few paragraphs cut and pasted over and over again.

Shorten it up to one page. Add some different descriptive words to your repetoire, and remove any trace of the word jiggle from anywhere in your story. No sex story should ever have a jiggle in it, anywhere. Certainly not half a dozen of them!

Good luck otherwise, I did enjoy the story.

One minor point. Unless the masseuse's friend has six arms, I think you meant "two pairs of hands" or "four hands", not "four pairs of hands.

Nevertheless, a very well thought out and descriptive erotic story. I'm glad you (and the masseuse) resisted the urge to lapse into intercourse.

WOW -- awesome. It would have been nice if the two providing the massage had accidentally "rubbed" each other. And a clit clamp...

Yumm

Why are all the good men in So. Cal?

Reading this story can be very arousing but, ironically, receiving the massage described would be less so. As a certified massage therapist, I've given hundreds of clients very sensuous massages. But I would never repeatedly skip between all the erogenous areas, quickly going back and forth between the vagina and breasts and hips and abdomen and inner thighs and anus again and again. The client would get much more sexual pleasure if the erotic massage strokes slowly increased in intensity in one part of the body at a time, without constantly going back and forth. Although retired now, I still give sensuous massages to all who ask, but I no longer charge anyone for the sessions. I just enjoy watching their reactions as he or she achieves sexual satisfaction. Author Powerone crammed a lot of arousal into this story, earning deservedly high ratings. I look forward to reading additional massage submissions from this talented writer.

very very good

Exceptionally Erotic and the tempting forray into submission and dominance it perfect

I have to say it was a turn off to see Oriental used, it's an old out of date term. Also, Japanese or Japanese American? Pick one.

You hit all the right buttons...all tbe naughtyness if sex, great details...

What happened to part 2?

Hi Powerone, this is one of my favorite stories of yours. What happened to part 2? That’s the hottest story, I’ve come back to it again and again over the years. Please let us know if we can find it anywhere. Thanks!