All Comments on 'Femboy's Fate: Sage'

So much beautiful story and I want more if it! I love how Ouinn is so caring with Sage during sex. It was so wonderful:)

I love Sage's appearance and his cosplay fantasy. It's really so much beautiful. Thank you Eraj, for this story :)

Another great story! Very hot and emotional at the same time. And such a surprising twist at the end! I can't wait for the next part.

I love how intense the sex scenes are, super hot!

Good, fuck it was hot!

Thank you for the mention. I enjoyed this story and learned some stuff...

More, please, next chapter

I think your first femboy story went surprisingly well! :) I like the cosplay element and his anime background. And the cute knee socks, it felt femboyish :) I like how Quinn is treating Sage, and I loved their sex scene, very romantic considering the circumstances. I'm very curious how the mystery of his identity will be solved ;)

Such a lovely story it brought tears to my eyes. Please continue ♥ 😘

A beautiful, sexy, hot story. I love it!

A good write..pse don't end at Chap 2, this story has at least 5 Chaps.

The twist at the end almost made my jaw drop. The sex was beautiful and intense. Full of emotion.

Great stuff, can't wait to see where you take these two, keep it up.

A lovely thoughtful story, sensitive handling of the real person self-doubt and inner stress. I ask myself will the relationship blossom? I'll have to wait to find out

@Gaybriel

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked these nuances. I wanted to make my character different than usual, as I felt I'm going into the same boring patterns in my stories - my characters being either drawing artists or IT specialists, so I needed to expand a bit :)

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@BrendaNW

Thank you so much, and I will! There will be even more emotions! :)

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@Anonymous

There will be more :)

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@AlinaXA

It was a pleasure to work with you! :)

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@Anonymous

Thank you!

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@Anonymous

I'm glad you appreciate it! :)

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@Marasso

I'm happy you liked it! And I'm waiting for your new trans stories :D

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@ESTECZESTECZ

I hoped you would like it! I appreciate your comment ;) And there will be even more touching moments later on ;)

This was amazing!!!

What an amazing story. Personal preference, but I wish quinn hadn't touched sage's penis. Please keep writing this great stuff.

It is a great story please continue it

@Eraj, I have no words to express my admiration for this story, it is a very beautiful and emotional story. It shows how a young boy becomes an escort and on the road he meets a man in a very bad condition, sad, almost like a continuous empty world, in need of a moment of sex. And meeting Sage and these moments of erotic elation bring them closer together. I fell in love with the character of Sage and I got used to him, I would like to know how the fate of Sage and Quinn will turn out? 📝

Greetings from Poland, Sissy Joasia from Warsaw. 😘

@Eraj, nie mam słów aby wyrazić swój podziw dla tej historii, jest to bardzo piękna i emocjonująca historia. Ukazuje jak młody chłopak staje się eskortą a na drodze trafia na mężczyznę w bardzo złym stanie, smutnego, wręcz jakby wciągłym pustym świecie, potrzebującym chwilę seksu. A spotkanie Sage i te chwile uniesień erotycznych przybliżają ich do siebie. Bardzo przypadła Mi postać Sage i zżyłem się z nim, już bym chciał wiedzieć jak potoczą się losy Sage i Quinn? 📝

Pozdrawiam z Polski, Sissy Joasia z Warszawy. 😘

@Anon

It will happen! :)

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@ Anon

Quinn wanted to re-create the loving atmosphere he had with his wife :) He was also bisexual, so it was not a problem for him :)

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@BlowPop

Thank you for reading it!

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@woodseaves

I promise you will be surprise! :)

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@Anon

I will keep it up :)

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@LTD1982LTD1982

I appreciate your kind words! Soon there will be more :)

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@Anonymous

Sadly I have only 2 chapters ready...

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@freyafertility

I thank you for these nice compliments :)

Dear readers! Please check how I imagined Sage appearance on my twitter: MR.Eray :)

You are an amazing author, your stories are a beautiful escape. Please continue to bless us with your wonderful works. Sending hugs xXx.

Another lovely story - you definitely have a gift with this genre. I love the introduction of a femboy as I can relate to Sage very much - dressing up is so liberating and erotic. He's so lucky to find someone like Quinn, who's clearly so very thoughtful and caring. The sex as always is wonderful - loving and intimate. Looking forward to the second and final part. Thank you again Eraj for being such a wonderful storyteller.

pls continue

@MysticalRubyz

I will :)

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@Anonymous

Thank you for such a kind words and a lot of compliments! It helps me to push through writer's block!

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@JoJo1975

I'm glad you liked it, I will soon publish second part ;)

Very nice story ❤️

I, Love it it is a BEAUTIFUL LOVE STORY. About to stranger who had experience simler lost. That brought them together what started with Sage's circumstances. And Quinn circumstances They were able to help each other. Please continue the story. Thank You AlinaX.

Please hurry with the next part!

Oh wow! So good, intense. Thank you!

This is a fabulously beautiful story! where is Part 2, please?

Please hurry with the next part

Can't wait for the conclusion. Soon pleaseyrs soon!

@Anon, I have it almost finished, I just need to mobilize myself a bit :D

Please do not let this be the end. You are such an amazing writer. I love this story and so badly want more!!

@anon, I will try to finish it :)

Just want to say you have an excellent story starting here both romantic and hot, even intriguing which is rare for an erotic story.

Hope you give us part two soon, cy then!

Thank you, @anon, I hope for it too, I have it almost finished but I was so busy in last 6 months I barely had time for writting new stuff.

Eddy, or is it Eraj? I’ve noticed others addressing you that way. Either way, let me say that I loved this story. 💕 I don’t go for dominance, violence, or forced stuff, so I very much loved Quinn’s treatment of Sage and Sage’s surprise at the tenderness that could be shown by a “client”. The twist at the end totally caught me off guard. Fantastic! I can’t wait for a continuation (let’s not say final chapter 😉).

Much love,

Raquel

@Raquels_Panties

I appreciate your kind comment so much, I also like gentle stories, I never include real brutalization between my main characters. I love to write about crossdressers, femboys and tgirls, so I hope you will enjoy some of my other stories also! :) Thank you so much for your nice words!

meh. some is good, some not so good.

why does it have to be the first time whoring? are you comfortable with it, or are you not?

@VerbalAbuse

Are you asking about the story premise?

It was just my idea, to portray characters' firsts experiences of this type, as more often than not, "firsts" are more emotionally intense and more challenging.

If that were his experience after one year of doing his escort job, it would be just more likely business as usual, and the story plot alone could not be strong enough to pull if off. But maybe some people could do it well.

I hope I understood what you meant correctly. :)

such a sweet story, didn't expect romance in escort story but loved it so much!

@anon, thank you, except for one - story all my stories have a romance element :D

I even have this in my BIO :D hobby: writing MM romances, haha :D

Already anxious for the next part.

@SaraSera

Thank you :*

I hope it will be soon... if I mobilize myself to do it :D

Right, sure, maybe the plot requires it. I can't argue with that.

But the innocent whore, the whore that's not a whore, the first time whoring whore is... not just a much abused trope, it just doesn't fly.

I don't know, just an unsolicited opinion.

@VerbalAbuse

No problem at all, I appreciate all opinions. :) Although, I'm not entirely sure if I understand you correctly. Are you suggesting that you don't like the idea of the escort being inexperienced? Just to clarify, Sage is not a virgin; he has had a boyfriend before. Every escort had to start somewhere, right?

:)

As I mentioned, my intention never was to write about an experienced escort. Personally, I find it much more interesting to read about someone's first experiences rather than their thousandth.

However, I understand that some readers may prefer stories that feel closer to real life, and dislike stories about a first-time escort magically finding the right person. Yes, I agree it might seem a bit improbable, haha :) But well, it's just a fantasy of mine. It's not meant to be a realistic portrayal of an escort's day-to-day life. :) Sorry if I didn't deliver what you've expected.

Nice story! I hope you continue

@anon, I hope it will be soon :D

😭😭😭This is sooooo amazing... like I just started reading now without noticing if it has other parts😭 and now I just realized it doesn't have other parts. I have to wait for them💔 but I'm gonna be patient coz wow! This is so good😩 I love your stories🥺❤️

@Anon, I will finish it, I just stuck at one point and have some trouble to focus on the coherent plot line...

You are an amazing story writer😚keep it up🥺❤️

That was an amazing story I hope there is more to come. I absolutely loved it

@anons, thank you, I need to read it once more and get myself in the mood for the second part 🫣

Edey,

Great story, so sweet! ❤️

VerbalAbuse

if you search for stories about more slutty characters Edey is probably not the best choice for you. But the good news is 70% stories on Literotica are about sluts so I would say, it's good to have a more diverse range of authors. Let him have his style.

@anon,

Thank you, yes I'm not into writing about so called "sluts", I just think there are better authors in Lit that are true masters in writing stories about people with a very high sex drive and I know I would do horrible job with that 😂 so I prefer to write something that vibes with me.

But I understand that my choice of topics may not be everybody cup of tea, and that I would not be the best author for everyone.

I hope everyone will find perfect story for themselves on Lit 🥰

Omg this was so good. I hope you continue it. What are the chances?! Can they help each other heal?

@cannd

I have 70% of the story :D I hope I will finalize it soon :)

@Edey thank you so so much for your stories! I’m so impressed! It’s 100% the type of content I love the most! It’s so heartfelt, and deep.

Please know you stand out A LOT!!!!

@aag900

I'm thankful for your words! I'm happy you liked my stories, and they were to your taste. :)

I'm more of a niche author here, probably with too many romance elements, which is not always appreciated, but I'm even happier there are still people who enjoy my works! <3

Maybe you will also like my "My Destiny" and "Thin Line Between" stories? :)

I would love to read more of this story. Please write more. Thanks!

I hope I will find strength, as I was invested in debuting on Amazon with my book and couldn't find time to finish it :(

Please, Please write the next chapter! You are an excellent author. I love your stories, and this one has all the hallmarks to be one of your best!

Wow!!!’

I’m loving this story. I need a sage in my life. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Please, PLEASE finish this story Edey I am in LOVE with your writing and always have been! I want Quinn and Sage to fall in love and share their bereavement together and to help each other move on.

Would be forever grateful. Kate xxx

@Anons

From all my unfinished businesses here on Literotica, it's the most likely I will finish at least this one :) It’s the first one on my list To Do.

@jrrtolkien420 Who wouldn't want a pretty femboy, right? :D

Please part 2🔥

@Anon, I'm trying to do so ;)

Please continue😭 this is so good so far. Hope they will have a happy ending without blaming each other or their families for the accident. I hope they always stay together . They deserve it.

@anon I always write stories with HEA :)