by jbrady884
Still a decent premise.
Sex happens too fast. Lacks details. He eats her pussy for several minutes. That's all you say, several minutes. That's not erotic writing. That's a bullet point to be elaborated on.
Three stars.
Very sexy story!!! I would love some of this treatment...Keep writing,your story makes me horny...
The good thing is that with more sissy's in the world, pussy becomes irrelevant. It's a win win.
So horny. Sissies like us can only really please real men and be humiliated by sexy women. Xx
Fucking Fabulous!!!!! 5 stars!!!!! Pleeeeeease write more like this!! I loved it!!!