by Pantieslave
Very intense and enjoyable. One think though that I think would make it better is putting some layers of background behind David and giving him dialog (rather than "he said"). I look forward to the next chapter.
Loved it ,this is a story that need to continue ,please part 3 and more
Sissy Michelle
The premise of the story sounds like a lot of fun. I wish it were me and that they would go even further with me.