All Comments on 'Ferall Shorts: Mr. Flynn Ch. 02'

Wow I honestly enjoy taking a peep into Mr. Flynn's thoughts. And his inner struggle was interesting. I can't say I have read a male character like him before. I am so curious and excited to know what happens between these two!!! The possibilities are endless!

Intriguing, insightful character development and, yes, I think you did well in writing it from the POVs of both the female and male characters. I really like how this story probes the complexity and humanity of both characters with an astute sensitivity to class and race and socio-cultural and interpersonal influences and nuances. You are very good writer. More please.

This was sooooooo hot. Can’t wait for more !!

The peek into the male character reasonings and why he did what he did is a unique take that most authors do not take. The focus is always on the main/female lead. Getting into the head of the male counterpart adds depth to the story not often seen or explored. It's more engaging to know that this character is a person too, not just a plot device

This is quite a leap writing from his perspective. I never would have though that I'd sympathize with a character like Flynn but I do. I'm conflicted and I love it! cannot wait to read more from you!!

Holy fuck o_o yesssssssss!!

I didn't think someone could squeeze such complexity in such a compact story. This is really good can't wait to see more from you!

Pure magic. The complexity of these characters, the back story, the longing. The slow burn before ignition. It’s all just pure magic.

Mooooorreee please more. I forgot the name of this toey and searched for days to find it again. MORE!

Wow thank you all!

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Ho-leeee shit that's hot!

Yes! Keep writing. I'm buying everything you're putting out.

Please keep writing!!

This 2nd part provided their background that made much more context to his desire for her. Where’s part 3.

Don‘t do this to us! Where is part 3?!

Please continue this excellent tale…we are hooked!