All Comments on 'Ferall Shorts: Mr. Flynn'

Great story ... or start of a story, I hope. Interesting, well-constructed characters and plot crescendos. More please. More, more, more.

How can you be a FORMER vet?

A vet is someone who has served in the military.

One can be a FORMER soldier, a vet is synonymous.

A very exciting beginning. What happens next?

@Anonymous

"One can be a FORMER soldier, a vet is synonymous."

Thanks for pointing that out. 'Tis a mistake on my part. Unfortunately seems like I can't change it after it's been uploaded. But thanks for letting me know!

Excellent start we hope. There's so much more story here. Five stars.

I suspected it was you with the Army references, and of course I 100% knew it was you when I got to the metalhead part. Ha!

Elle

Interesting story, wonder where it will go.

I WANT MORE!!!! This is a great start and I’ll be waiting for the next chapter!!!

More more more!! I’m loving this

Can't say I read a story quite like this before! Great plot interesting characters and that sex scene? Omg !!! More pwease!!

ugh this is sensational. I LOVE this.

More! Pretty please.

I like it a lot!

This story is so hot please come back