All Comments on 'Fertility Clinic Pt. 03: The Harvest'

by thomas_dean

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sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 3 years ago

Don't come to LW from other categories. It won't go well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Ending could use some more juiciness of the ending, sort left things HANGING. lol

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago

That was an awfully poor excuse for a LW story.

thomas_deanthomas_deanabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your comments. There wasn't an exact category for two people in love with each other, but enjoy fooling around. Jerry isn't jealous of Amy a college student whose paying internship may relieve her of flipping burgers, but his curiosity leads Jerry to ask her to reenact the scenes she faces at work. I hope this explains the premise of the story. I hope to make it clearer in future installments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WTF?

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