All Comments on 'Fertility Treatment'

Really enjoyed this, Now, I will have check out your other stories!

good fun but maybe they need another treatment.

To save money they have a party to do the same

So did Heidi get pregnant? Did they come back for a second treatment? Did the two couples get together for sex as well as supper? So many opportunities for a part two!

But the sex scenes aren't really erotic. They just happen. No significant teasing. Nothing that could constitute extended foreplay. No material dialog during the sex scenes.

Really missing all that -- and more.

Omart

yes you should check them....Stoner is one of the good ones

Excellent concept and character development. Thought your world building worked phenomenally. I join other users in encouraging you to slow down your pacing for sex scenes. Bring us into the intimacy and keep working on building toward a more satisfying climax.

Very imaginative here. I honestly thought it was going another direction, but this was a much better direction. Well done...

Overall, it's good. Hot! But we have hardly any idea what the couples looked like, what the characters felt watching the staffer masturbate after the treatment. A little more description would really put this over the top.

Hmmmmmm! i missed the fun in this story. i know a name or two was messed up. that threw me off a bit...

Really, did it work? The story is not finished until we know the couples conceived.