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KingCuddleKingCuddleover 3 years ago

Love it!

Perfect blend of innocence and discovery!

I felt like I was there.

I want to be! :+))

BillyTheGrayBillyTheGray12 months ago

What a great story! The tension slowly building, leading to a final climax, was done very well. I liked the authenticity throughout the story. Thanks for writing.

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