All Comments on 'Fever Dream Pt. 03'

I thought you pretty much abandoned this story. Glad it's not the case.

Great story, nice build up and exciting lead in's. can't wait for the finish.

Loved every bit of it. You are a great writer.

Thanks for the story.

Awaiting next chapter.

all my thoughts got jumbled and formed just one word there...just WOW! again...you are one great writer who truly knows how to write a literary piece in this genre...you can bring out all the thoughts and emotions of your character in this great story and you also belong in the top rated authors here...I know there should be no comparison among writers here since each one has something unique to bring to the table of this erotic site...your work is worthy all the stars and you might even give some writers of other erotic bestsellers out there a run for their money...I even missed the errors for I got so lost in the story.....glad you're also back and just like your main guy Jackson...stay with us for good...I mean, like Stella...we've been waiting for ages and dying to read more so keep the chapter/s coming real fast ok...see I got crazy already...btw, Thank you for this amazing story

Wow I must say I'm simply blown way by what this chapter brought in and where it lead the story as a whole. Might be weird to say for an erotic story but the lack of sex really elevated this to a whole new plane and actually made the characters and their suffering more pronounced and important than the simple act of having sex. And now where and how this is going I have my ideas but I like the suspense and the things not being said immediately. Hopefully you'll bring the next one out a bit sooner then *wink* *wink*

Still a fat 5* from me!

I like others thought this was another dead story.

But it was certainly worth the wait and the time reading parts 1 and 2 again.

This story has everything and I look forward to the revelations that are sure to come for Stella and Jackson.

I thought we'd lost this story b so really pleased to see this chapter, hope to see the next chapter soon. Not enough stars so can only give five.

I actually checked on whether this story had been updated and I'd missed it about a week ago, noticing your note that it was coming. Well I would probably wait another year for something as well put together as this (okay, no really, don't actually do that...). I'll admit that I didn't fully remember the story so I reread the first 2 installations as well and it's such a good read. There's definitely some errors poking their heads up here and there which someone with fresh eyes could catch for you but your character formation is so deep and thoughtful it pulls you in regardless. The anxiety and emotional turmoil is written so well, it puts you in the mindset of the character and their situation.

I await the next part with real interest, wanting to know what will develop and how exactly the twins have changed. Emotions are building and something always pops off when it gets too much. Keep up the good work!

Another master piece from you.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

This is the most enjoyable story I've read that had virtually no sex in it. Despite the lack of sex there is a heightened erotic tension throughout that makes up for it! I am thoroughly blown away! I have been hanging on every word so far and I'm so glad I just discovered this story and didn't wait for an agonizing year for this chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter! I have read stories on here that tugged the heartstrings and stories that made me cum repeatedly. This is one of only 2 that has done both. The other is the Alex and Alexa series. This is the furthest thing from the typical and overplayed mom/sister seeing son/brother jacking off and couldn't help herself and needed his cock NOW! Bravo! Keep UP the outstanding work!

-Jim

I'm daily opening this site to check for the update on next chapter.

I'm in love with this series.

Where's the next chapter?, are we must wait for another year again?

You are a great writer.

5* not enough for you.

Waiting for the next chapter. Please make it fast.

A Big thanks for the story.

I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Sure hope you are about to release the next chapter. How about for our Xmas gift. Thanks. Bbtlg6@gmail.com

It has been a year since you updated the chapter 3.

Please make sure we get the next chapter soon.

Your admirer.

This story is 99% better than the schlock on this site. It's just a really, really excellent story & read. You're an exceptional writer! I usually avoid twincest (for some arbitrary reason, lol), but what you've written here is a real love story. I would like to believe that you're out there somewhere working on the 4th chapter (and more). So, please do come back and give us more to the story or give us an ending! Please! You see how many people love it ! Come back!

You're off my fave list if you don't come back and finish this! You can't tell I'm a woman, can you, lol.

Somebody finish this story, if the original author doesn't come back after a certain time. It's just to good of a piece of art to leave unfinished.

Kinda sad this isn't getting the attention it deserves! Hope you're still out there, working on a conclusion.

I can say with ease that I have never been as emotionally invested in a story on this site until this one. I would slap a nun in the mouth to see this finished. Absolutely tremendous.

Hi SpiritOfTheStairwell,

It has been almost 9 months since the release of your last part.

Would you be so kind as to give an update on the story?

Kind regards,

DML

As a college professor and a vet this story has captivated me. How will Stella and Jack get through this? Will Stella understand his sacrifice he made when she finds out the facts? Will Paul share with Stella? Do the parents know? We need more!

...., and it’s time for another part. Lord, I hope another is on the way. I would love to find out what is next. This has been wonderful, so far

We are still waiting for next part

One year later, come on man. Update the story

Dear Mr. @SpiritoftheStairwell,

Are you still there?

I don't care if you don't give any hints about the progress of your writing on this story but please reply to us just to show that your still okay and fully intends to finish this story becaus this stories pretty great dude.

There is so much to tell you all, and in the Authors Note in what i submitted today should explain it for you. Its been one hell of a year, and i wanted to just put this out there. I'm Back! I'm writing! Its coming! I submitted just a taste of what is to come, an interlude if you will, that is short but VERY impactful. thank you all for your patience and support. I love you guy!

Hi Spirit.

Another powerful chapter. Loved how Stella cut lose for a bit, it's easy to see they both love each other very deeply. I know this isn't a fairy tale, but damn I'm so wishing this story works out for them in the long-run

(Grabs popcorn) This is one reader that is in for the long-haul, I just hope it isn't long before we get the next update after your brief Interlude chapter :)

Hi Spirt,

Just noticed on my re-reading this chapter again how it was interesting that Stella & Jack both having their individual meltdowns at almost the same time being twins. Stella with the car buying and throwing off her control measures, and while she was doing that Jack was running for all he was worth, trying to get all that anger and rage out of himself.

1 of the Best stories I have read on this site,twists,turns,love anger,has it all,love ut,good job on this Story.

You can end this here. There might be some loose ends to tie up but there was so much tension. Well done.

I feel there is so much of the story left to be told.

Uh huh committment he never loved anyone else even after 10 years but she did damn I may be crazy but I feel hurt when she say love to another when she herself said she never broken the promises she maid I'm really crazy for thinking this tho..

Damn how did I not find this story for this long, this has to easily be one of the best incest romance stories, I can't imagine how great it would have been if it was finished, but I can only hope that you will be able to make time for it and get the twins to their end of the romantic journey together, and us being the spectators. If you're still around I hope you're doing well in life, thank you for this wonderful story, it was amazing while it lasted, now I will get back to imagining what could've been and happened, thanks again, hoping that you would get back someday.

This part was very good but the relationship of Stella and john weirded me out a bit, i understand what the whole thing between them was, but it was pretty weird, that is the only thing I disliked so far

excellent! would like to see further episodes to see some sort of hopefully happy ending.

I loved the story to this point but there are so many unanswered questions, the rape of stella, is her son John the result of that rape or was Jackson the father. Why did Jackson run off 10 years ago what did he do, did he kill the rapist, why did Jackson really marry a woman he never got intimate with and why hasn't the divorce been finalized, the author really needs to finish this and answer all of the questions and hopefully give Jackson and Stella their happily ever after. 5 stars to this point.

Ok, this is probably the best romantic story on this site, not just in this category. The intense and complex feelings and emotions the author portrays through such beautifully crafted characters...really touched me as a reader. A lot of subtle detail has been put into every setting which makes it a joy to appreciate every tiny part of the story. Hope the author returns and finishes this gem of a story.

I can only say WOW! I have searched in earnest to find stories like this here. I can maybe recall 2 that come close but nowhere near as deep and spellbinding as this. Please finish this! You have immeasurable talent and it would be a shame to not complete such a moving work of literature.

Powerful stuff! 5/5