All Comments on 'Fifty Shades of Brown Pt. 11'

Thank you for now including diarrhea. You’ve certainly moved things up a notch. I wonder whether Miele’s dominance will lead her to eventually insist that her submissive swallow some of it?

In reply to tltslv:

Thank you so much. Let's thank Mieke for including diarrhea. As you may have noticed this is my true life story. Of course I have changed the names.

I am just so damn lucky I found her after a very disappointing first relationship.

I am writing this story as a journal. This really happened to me and I will write new chapters when they are worthwhile writing about.

And to be honest, I am also hoping she will take this a lot further. Including the diarrhea swallowing and any crazy scat and piss acts I haven't even thought about.

Enjoy reading them!

"Max"