All Comments on 'Fighting and Loving'

definitely looking forward to more....

Yumm! This is a great start, very hot! I can't wait to read the encounter between those two. Please update soon!!

I thought this was a great beginning. I can't wait to see what happens next.

more! more! more!

i mean jeeeeez... talk about your cliffhangers!!!

seriously -- great job, and i am EAGERLY awaiting more on this story. your character development is great, the plot is perfect, the tension is exquisite.

now hurry up with the next chapter already....!!! lol

promises to be a super story.Look forward to reading the next installment.

A quality start for a first submission. Looking forward to next installment.

Love the tension you created.

Boyd

great intro. now just waiting for the next installment

What a wonderful start - PLEASE give us more soon! I love the tension between them.

WOWWWWWW...... what a wonderful way to start a story....I hope you write again really soon

That was a great start to your story. I just can't for the next chapter. Please update soon.

please put on the next chapter. the suspense is killing me dammit.

once again: HURRY THE HELL UP! writing style is fantastic ;-D

I love this story so far. More please. :)

PLease hurry up with the next instalment and let me know when you do so I can read it. I was going through the new ones and found it again. Please send notice so I can just find it.

I can't to read more and more....please hurry

Just some details in case you decide to continue writing stories with Aikido in them: Most aikido does not involve competition or sparring, even during advanced tests. This is because most shihan and sensei feel that this would go against the philosophy of Aikido. There is a school of Aikido that includes sparring - its name escapes me at the moment.

During examinations, we demonstrate what we have learned mostly through two-person kata. Although we do engage in randori, which is somewhat freestyle and free-flowing application of the Aikido techniques on one or more attackers. This is as close to sparring as we get, and we do expect the attacks to be sincere. However, this is not the same as sparring where both persons are competing against each other.

not being feminist but serioudly nicole seems rather weak to me and am surprise she does something as karate(yeah i know not the rite name but all the same to me)and the hole pushing her to her best thing is kinda lame.

Good job. I love johow original the story is please update more

I love the flow of the characters thus far.

time for some close contact--wonder what Des has in his past, other than fighting.

According to all of the comments out of the five chapters, I should wait until they are all published. Well. It looks a bit too good to wait.

Very well-written. I can't wait to get started in the second instalment.

just found this story, rated pretty high, I hope the other chapters have more pages. a good story line is always a given of 3 stars, but a lengthily interesteng and unique story line is a gem.

mind you, I myself am experiencing writer's block... lol

Loved the chemistry. Hope it is longer chapters...my one complaint is that it was too short :0) well done

To those reading this now, don't continue unless you want to read an unfinished story that hasn't been added to in 4 years.