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MagentaBlaze over 1 year ago

Love this!!

Do you need an editor? I can handle grammar stuff, and yes I'm only offering so I can get chapters faster.

When Jazz realizes Dream was setting her up after doing her hair and makeup, what did she mean? Or is the answer to that in the next chapter?

SimplySilver over 1 year agoAuthor

I certainly could use a secondary set of eyes on the chapters before they post; given the tight time table I'm posting on, sometimes things slip through the cracks as I'm making final edits.

That's an answer you'll get next chapter. :) Every chapter will make things clearer.

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