All Comments on 'Fighting for Broken Trust Ch. 01'

This is a bit unusual, I am very much enjoying the way this story is evolving. More please. 5 stars.

no one on the planet is that docile. And if there is a man out there like this I feel sorry for your offspring. Your wife cheating on you is one thing but another man physically assaulting you in "YOUR OWN HOME" and you do nothing. Then you deserve the whore and anything else that happens to you.

What happened to Chapter 2?

While chapter 1 certainly had some weaknesses (nothing is perfect), it makes you curious how the plot might dissolve.

This is a Story that I would still like to read to "The End" even after eight years of waiting.

I believe that, with Chapter 1 being the only one published, your story is definitely "suffering" right now. There is nothing worse than a story without an ending.

Hoping for a continuation

Ano

It looks like you have stopped writing and that is a shame. This was a very good story but you described it as chapter 1. I really hope you are alive and well and can find it within yourself to finish the story. I think your readers deserve that. 4 stars because it is unfinished.

Hope all is well with you and yours. Since this was labeled Ch#1 it seems safe to assume their would be a #2. And so it is with concern I wish you health to be able to continue your life, dreams, and desires.

I hope you can finish this one. I like it so far. Since you are writing again, do you have any plans to finish it???

Where did the end go.....................?

5 from me. You had me in the first paragraph. This is an amazing Burn The Bitch story. I never really thought about this method of revenge. It has been an enlightening experience - keep up the great writing.

Well done, sir. You write very well and your approach is both unorthodox and engaging. May your struggles be rewarded.

LWlurker

5 stars from me. Great story

great so far. I would like a part 2 where maybe Nadine stays, and Terrance forces the 2 cheaters to live together with a very small $ "allowance"

Looks like FTDS needs to stand in and finish

It seems that the author, FinalStand, took the coward's way out. Decided to quit writing this while he was still ahead... Anyways, great job on the first chapter from a decade ago! Cheers!

Regards,

I.W.

Good Story, more please!!!

[09.12.22]

Excellent start...

11/10!!!!!

I definitely liked this story. Hopefully we can get more later!

I liked this beginning. Something different than the norm. Would love to hear more if you feel like take it on again.

brilliant.

But how can a person bear all the storm of emotions and still control them all?

An excellent strategist.

Waiting to continue.

get 5