All Comments on 'Fighting For Her Ch. 01'

your writing skills are very good an interesting read though i wanted to read the whole thing in a single go dont make me wait too long for next parts

I really liked it... wish there was more of it but I guess I'll have to wait. Can't wait to see what happens.

enjoyed it..cant wait for the rest and if you dont mind a small request, the color of her eyes, mention that..thanx..

well-written! I really enjoyed it =)

I would like to point out that you spelled annihilation wrong, though ("And in self-defense, your life comes first, right? But there is a difference between self-defense and complete annhaliation. Do what you must to protect your life, but don't cross the line of massacre.").

That's my only criticism/constructive comment. otherwise, awesome! thanks for writing it =)

simply beautiful - love how you let us get to know the characters - can't wait to continue reading

Awesome read

Good story; please have someone edit for grammar

Good story. Looking forward to reading the next three chapters.

Looking forward to reading the rest of it.