All Comments on 'Fighting Love'

You keep it real. Nicely done.

I loved it!

A tough kick boxing soft-cock. Dumb shit, that all he'll be. Dump the slut and find a real woman you fucking wimp. Harden up a bit before it's too late. You're only gonna be strong and fast for so long. Then what? Stupid girlie boy.

The clarity it takes to view the world this way is hard earned. You'd have to experience a lot to be able to write that way. Your wording makes the characters appear easily in my head and i could see the main char bouncing on the balls of his feet in the ring. The swinging punches, the sights and sounds. You should try writing a fictional story - maybe one about ancient warriors or gunfighters or knights on the battle field. Absolutely amazing. If all your works are like this or are better - you should try and get published.

whare ar all dem biches fer me ta pull ma taffy to? took me haf a beer to find the litel man and this is all i git fer wakin off readin? imma go hump sis fer a bit.